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It is sometimes argued that too many students go to university, while others claim that a university education should be a universal right.

Some people I have met in my life believe that everyone who finishes school must go to a place of higher
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. I would like to argue about
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 issue due to the fact that there are a lot of of talented people who don't go to
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 but spend time on more crucial things to succeed. In
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 essay, I am about to investigate different opinions on
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 argument and define my own decision. There are various reasons why I consider going to
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 not necessary for everyone, but of course, everybody must have
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 right since there is always perhaps a change of a person's line of life.
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, if I have been doing art for the whole life and somehow I decided to change my hobby and start a business related to my artworks. I am convinced that
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 must go to
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 to learn the way of running a business. In my judgment, learning is an interesting aspect of humans' minds. There are no impossible things to learn, and higher
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 gives us an opportunity to get our knowledge proved by special documents to present them to the campaign you would like to work in. It is always a privilege having a
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 diploma. But I still consider that if there is a desire of doing anything, you can be a professional by self-
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 and practicing a lot. Overall, people have different views on
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. Some believe that it is very advantageous if the majority of the students go for higher
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 after schools.
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, people who review other ways of learning
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 as self-sustaining one or just a practicing way by entering the workplace aged 18. My own view on
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 topic is that
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 is not about getting into high-class
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, it is about a desire you possess and the effort you implement to acquire knowledge.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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