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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people lives. Other think that adults life brings more happiest, in spite of great responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Happiness is the key to healthy
life
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.All the individuals always make efforts in order to remain happy.It is said by some individuals that adolescent period of
life
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 is more joyful
,
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,
while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 believes that
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life
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the life
 of a grown up
person
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 is more satisfying than a teenager.In my perspective, both phases of
life
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has
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have
 its own charm and my viewpoints on both opinions will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
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,
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,
life
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 of a
juveline
an athletic competition in which a javelin is thrown as far as possible
javelin
juvenile
 is full of fantasy and excitement because he/ she gets love
,
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,
 affection and support from parents. Parents try to fulfil their needs so that he/ she can do something in his/ her
life
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.When a
person
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 is adolescent
then
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 he/ she has less responsibilities in his/ her
life
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.
For instance
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, a survey was conducted in the year of 2015 and its result was that 50 percent population of youth is more
satisfied
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satisfying
 as compared to
old
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older
 age groups and adults.
On the other hand
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, some people argue that adults enjoy their
life
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 more because whenever any
person
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 becomes
adult
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an adult
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then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 he
/
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she can experience married
life
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 which brings
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
 and happiness in their
life
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.They get
chance
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a chance
the chance
 to share their
feeling
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feelings
 and emotions with other persons.
when
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When
 a
person
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become
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becomes
 mature
then
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 he/ she can make tough decisions of his/ her
life
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 because of his/ her past experiences and mistakes.So
,
Accept space
,
 adulthood is
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
 that phase of
life
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 which enhances the understanding power of an individual and it
also
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 make him/ her wise. To recapitulate,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would like to write it can be said that we
can not
can not
cannot
 consider any particular phase of
life
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 perfect because joy and sorrow is the part of
life
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.People experience happiness and sadness in all the phases of
life
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.
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