Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?

These
day
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days
,
tourism
is focused and
expanded especially
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expanded, especially
in developing countries. There are some reasons which lead to
this
case; and in my opinion,
this
trend brings both benefits and drawbacks. There are several explanations why developing countries expand
tourist
industries.
Firstly
, developing countries might think that
tourism
helps them to solve poverty. When coming to a
tourist
attraction, tourists will spend money on services in the local areas
such
as entertainment activities, accommodation. The local could seize
this opportunities
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this opportunity
these opportunities
to earn a living by providing
services meeting
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services, meeting
the demand of tourists. Gradually, there might be an improvement in
living standard
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the living standard
of local people and poverty can be eliminated in countries in a backward state.
Secondly
, developing countries may think that expanding
tourist
industries
is
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are
a way for them to promote their images. When tourists come to a country, if they are impressed by unique things
such
as beautiful landscapes, friendly people, etc..
visitors
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Visitors
might help advertise these places.
Therefore
, poor and less developed countries are likely to have a chance to be well-known all over the world. Developing
tourism
in underdeveloped countries can have both advantages and disadvantages. In terms of advantages,
tourism
actually can help to tackle poverty and popularize a country’s image as discussed in the paragraph above.
However
,
tourism
does have some downsides. If a place is exploited too much, it can suffer from pollution, which in turn affects people’s life negatively.
For example
, Hai Tien used to be an unspoiled
beaches
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beach
with beautiful sceneries in Vietnam.
Then
a huge number of
tourist
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tourists
come
here bringing
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here, bringing
trash, rubbish and throw them everywhere. Because of that, the water is polluted, the air is smelly and the beach is full of plastic cans, nylon bags.
Thus
, the local have to suffer from diseases stemming from pollution. In conclusion, the trend of expanding
tourist
industries is attributed to several factors; and
this
issue can have both good sides and bad sides.
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