Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?

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is focused and

expanded especially

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expanded, especially

in developing countries. There are some reasons which lead to

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case; and in my opinion,

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trend brings both benefits and drawbacks. There are several explanations why developing countries expand

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industries.

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, developing countries might think that

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helps them to solve poverty. When coming to a

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attraction, tourists will spend money on services in the local areas

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as entertainment activities, accommodation. The local could seize

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this opportunities

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this opportunity

these opportunities

to earn a living by providing

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services, meeting

the demand of tourists. Gradually, there might be an improvement in

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the living standard

of local people and poverty can be eliminated in countries in a backward state.

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, developing countries may think that expanding

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industries

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a way for them to promote their images. When tourists come to a country, if they are impressed by unique things

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as beautiful landscapes, friendly people, etc..

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might help advertise these places.

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, poor and less developed countries are likely to have a chance to be well-known all over the world. Developing

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in underdeveloped countries can have both advantages and disadvantages. In terms of advantages,

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actually can help to tackle poverty and popularize a country’s image as discussed in the paragraph above.

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,

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does have some downsides. If a place is exploited too much, it can suffer from pollution, which in turn affects people’s life negatively.

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, Hai Tien used to be an unspoiled

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beach

with beautiful sceneries in Vietnam.

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a huge number of

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tourists

come

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trash, rubbish and throw them everywhere. Because of that, the water is polluted, the air is smelly and the beach is full of plastic cans, nylon bags.

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, the local have to suffer from diseases stemming from pollution. In conclusion, the trend of expanding

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industries is attributed to several factors; and

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issue can have both good sides and bad sides.