Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about how governments should measure their countries’ progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of improvement are just as important.
There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries.
Firstly
, a healthy economy result in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for all citizens. Linking Words
Secondly
, economic advance ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. Linking Words
For example
, a government with higher revenues can invest in the country's transport network, its education system and its hospitals. Linking Words
Finally
, a strong economy can help a country’s standing on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power.
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However
, I would argue that various other forms of development are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. Linking Words
In particular
, we should consider the area of social justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself. Linking Words
For example
, the treatment of minority groups is often seen as a reflection of the moral standards and level of development of a society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging the progress of a modern country should be how well that country protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of its residents.
In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country’s success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite