(opinion one) A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, (opposing opinion) while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some
Suggestion
Some
people do not feel that they are personally responsible to others and
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. Some are not aware the effect of littering can have on the society. They are many people believe that lack of littering bins in the cities and towns. Once littering
strats
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
starts
streets
to pile up people less inclined to dispose it properly. There are some people who throw the
litters
the literary culture
letters
in the surrounding rather that it disposing in a proper manner. Most of the us
thnik
judge or regard; look upon; judge
think
that no punishment and they can easily escape from getting
punishment
Suggestion
a punishment
or
penality
the act of punishing
penalty
.
Childen
Suggestion
Children
should be
tought
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
taught
the effect of littering in the school. There must be
more number
Suggestion
number
of bins which is
accessable
capable of being reached
accessible
to public. Government should
organises
Suggestion
organise
compaigns
a race between candidates for elective office
campaigns
campaign
for increasing the awareness. There must harsher punishment and
cameres
equipment for taking photographs (usually consisting of a lightproof box with a lens at one end and light-sensitive film at the other)
cameras
on the street to catch people in the act.
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