Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.

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Pets have for ages been considered
integral part
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an integral part
of homes across nations and their role in making families complete cannot be over emphasised.
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, in recent times,
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related injuries and diseases have sparked heated debates around safety of homes with pets. In
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essay I shall argue that
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dangers are grossly overemphasised and
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children receive substantive benefits from pets.
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with,
although
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exotic pets (e.g.
snakes
limbless scaly elongate reptile; some are venomous
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, tiger, spiders, apes, etc.)
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been known to hurt, injure and even kill children,
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incidents are almost unheard of with respect to conventional pets like cats, dogs, rabbits.
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is largely because these animals by their very nature are not fierce or wild and can be easily domesticated.
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, several researchers have found that over ninety percent of families who owned these pets had never felt endangered nor had there occurred any mishap involving them. The same research
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concluded that transmission of diseases from most pets was
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negligible and, in most cases, did not pose any risk to children. Seen in
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light, the claim that pets pose danger for children is really not true as far as typical pets are concerned.
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, pets are known to impact child psychology positively.
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is primarily because young
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owners frequently empathise with their pets and develop a lot of compassion that helps them build a balanced character which goes a long way towards building a good society.
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, a university study found that children who had grown up with pets were thirty percent less likely to bully others and resolve conflicts through aggression.
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, it is very likely that children who grow up with pets are likely to emerge as better personalities given everything else equal. In conclusion, I strongly support
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because of its immense benefit to families, especially children. These children emerge as better human and tend to understand the emotional aspects of things much better.
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, risks from domesticated pets
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as dogs, cats and rabbits, which constitute nearly ninety-nine percentage of all pets, pose no danger to most families and children.
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, as laws around
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get more stringent, exotic or wild
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would go away, completely erasing any remaining danger from
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ownership
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • companion
  • responsibility
  • care
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • social skills
  • transmit
  • diseases
  • allergies
  • safety risks
  • time
  • effort
  • money
  • mature
  • handle
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