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The map
illustrate
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illustrates
the difference of
felixstone
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in the year 1967 and 2001. Overall, facilities, natural landscapes and buildings were opened up. The
felixstone
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was modernized and developed. In the northeast of the Felixstone, farmland was replaced by
resort including hotel
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a resort including hotel
, swimming pool and tennis court. The high street
remain
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remains
unchanged,
however
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the shop parades in the left side of
road
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the road
had more compartments and each of them was getting smaller. In the right side of
road
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the road
, the apartments
was contributed
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were contributed
to replace the parade of shop, it was
similiar
marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
to the
opposit
being directly across from each other; facing
opposite
shop rows.
Moreover
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, the golf course which was in
promixity
the property of being close together
proximity
to the shops still exist. In the southeast of
felixstone
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,
marina
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the marina
and pier was
torned
having edges that are jagged from injury
torn
down and replaced by
public beach
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the public beach
while fish market was destroyed to make way for private beach. The cafe was removed to stay near the public beach. The hotel was moved and renovated while the car park was erected on the original site of
hotel
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the hotel
. Some dunes were demolished and replaced by wind
turbins
rotary engine in which the kinetic energy of a moving fluid is converted into mechanical energy by causing a bladed rotor to rotate
turbines
.
In addition
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, more trees were planted.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-expression
  • emotional release
  • storytelling
  • formal training
  • lasting value
  • impact
  • subjective nature
  • inclusivity
  • modern art movements
  • non-professional artists
  • recognition
  • expertise
  • dedication
  • anecdotal experiences
  • art education
  • inherent potential
  • structured learning
  • artistic excellence
  • creativity
  • talent
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