In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

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In the past, there were prefect close band between neighbours, but nowadays we even do not know our neighbours. There are several reasons why citizens have reduced their relations with neighbours and some ways which seems would be effective. Four main elements are to blame for why people have less contact with neighbours.
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, we spend a lot of time at work and are in association with our co-workers
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of neighbours.
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, nowadays, people have varied hobbies
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as watching a movie, playing video games, etc.
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therefore they
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Therefore, they
Therefore they
spend much more time inside their homes.
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, because of modern forms of communication we have a large circle of friends and we are in touch with them through social media. In consequence, these days people have a busy lifestyle,
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they have less time to be in touch with their neighbours. In order to have better contact between neighbours, there are some ways.
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of all, when a new neighbour comes to our area, we can bring a small gift for them and introduce ourselves.
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, social places
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as parks, gyms, and playgrounds for children in our neighbourhood can help us to strike up a friendship with our neighbours.
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, to have a regular meeting with neighbours in order to discuss about problems and other things in neighbourhoods which can affect them. In conclusion, modern lifestyles caused people do not have a working relationship with their neighbours.
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these ways likely will not be able to make neighbours as important as they were in the past, they will probably help us to develop our relationship with them.
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