Discuss advantages and disadvantages of bio technology.

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Nowadays, genetic engineering is becoming expanded and developed. Despite

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occurrence contribute to thrive of economic and may have good impact on people’s welfare, it deteriorates life of living organisms.

Bio technology

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Biotechnology

is able to save

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a life

for huge amount of people. Because, it’s main aim is to create essential medicines, special vaccines for incurable diseases, and discovering unknown features of human genes and organs.

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, it is able to restore organs, which are not valid anymore, by new systems.

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, now, people can live without one kidney, as scientists have innovated artificial kidney which can do all functions of it.

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field improves the financial condition of a country, as it invents additives for foods, which enhance nutritional value and make conventional groceries more attractive.

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, these are the main advantages.

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, there are many disadvantages.

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, the experiments done during the

production destroys

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production, destroys

entity of existing creatures. Because, extracting genes and trying to amend something in it is a mockery on innocent animals or people.

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, several years ago people

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made

a violent experiment on a dog, by replacing it’s body by their new technology.

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, it is obvious that

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systems

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system

cannot be used the whole life.

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harsh action made people angry and frightened.

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, things as GMO,

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in spite

that it’s

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that, it’s

nutrition damage people’s health by unusual chemicals. In a result, by long term consumption of these groceries people become weaker and slightly worsens the health. So, these are the major drawbacks. To conclude, these

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performances

bio technology

the branch of molecular biology that studies the use of microorganisms to perform specific industrial processes

biotechnology

is becoming

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are becoming

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progress.

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