Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but others believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Transport
of
fruit
and vegetables by
air
, to places where they are unavailable is on the rise. Some people believe that
this
is a positive development. Whereas, others find no justification for
this
mode of
transport
.
This
essay will discuss both points of view and I shall argue that
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the use
of aeroplanes for
transportation
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the transportation
of fresh items is justified. On the one hand, there are those who don’t support
transport
of fruits and vegetables by
air
and they have their reasons.
To begin
,
use
of
air
transport
will increase prices of fresh items. Since additional costs will be incurred on jet fuel and customs, it will drive up
overall price
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the overall price
of exotic
fruit
and vegetables.
On the contrary
, locally harvested items are more
cost
effective.
For instance
, locally produced apples
cost
around 150 rupees per KG and imported ones
cost
twice as much.
Such
a high
cost
excludes
majority
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the majority
of the population from buying them.
Moreover
, introduction of exotic
fruit
and vegetables adversely affects local small scale farmers. These farmers work all year to harvest and market their fresh
items but
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items, but
the availability of rare and out of
season
items increase the competition and reduce the earning potential.
For example
, in supermarkets, one can find oneself almost spoiled by the extravagant choice of
fruit
and vegetables. Those who can afford to buy generally prefer to choose the ones which are either out of
season
or exotic. Resultantly, the sale of locally produced
items
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item
drops.
On the other hand
, there are those who support the
use
of
air
transport
for
fruit
and vegetables and I agree with them because of its clear advantages.
Firstly
, Consumers get more options to choose from. Due to
transport
by
airplanes
, even those items which perish easily or are out of
season
can be made available in
distance
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distant
areas.
As a result
, consumers can choose from a wide range of options depending upon their
requirement
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requirements
and affordability. Take,
for example
, Metro Cash and Carry, a superstore where one can find
fruit
and vegetables ranging from winter to summer
season
.
This
is very helpful for those who prefer
certain type
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certain types
a certain type
of fresh items.
Secondly
, it creates healthy
competition which
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competition, which
in turn proves beneficial for the local industry. The
use
of
air
transport
, brings with it not only more variety of
fruit
and
vegetables but
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vegetables, but
also
new ways to
transport
, package and store these items which may be novel for local producers. In the long-run, the
resultant
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resulting
competition will encourage local farmers to learn the techniques to better store or package their produce so they too could sell in other parts of the World.
For instance
, Pakistan has arguably the best mangoes in the World but it does not enjoy the status of major mango exporter because local farmers are not aware of advances transportation, packaging and marketing techniques. In conclusion, it is evident that availability of
broad range
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a broad range
the broad range
of
fruit
and vegetables and introduction of novel methods of their packaging and storage justify the
transport
of fresh items by
air
. It is recommended that the government should help small scale farmers in setting up their storage facilities so that they could increase their income as well.
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