Companies pay salespeople according to how much they sell to customers. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages both to salespeople and customers?

A novel method that some firms implement in terms of salesmen's payment is that they will be paid based on the amount of sale they can have with the
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and buyers. From my perspective, the drawbacks of
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rationales. It seems that it may be an effective procedure, and it
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more competitiveness among
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. The more they could sell, the more money they would make.
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an attitude would be neither
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the advantage of sales employees nor the
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. First of all,
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may find it inconvenient
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to be advised or bothered, in some cases, by sellers to what is more recommended and what is not. Actually, they prefer to purchase out of freedom, not out of any lateral strain, or annoying and redundant suggests that salesman provide to guarantee their profits
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of
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' sake.
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, it is
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possible thing that an unhealthy or destructive comparison and competitiveness will form among employees. By illustration, they may persuade each other's consumers to purchase from them or convey a piece of inappropriate information about their rival colleagues in order to win the game of selling more at any cost.
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,
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an idea will promote job productivity and raise the company's revenue, salespeople alter some robots charged by selling more and more. I meant that other companionship behaviours,
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' rights, welfare, or
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, place beyond personal incomes.
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but not least, there is no doubt that one of the most crucial factors for applicants in the recruitment process is job security and insurance involvement. If they are paid based on their performance on a daily basis, no acute and sustainable commitment will occur.
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the opinion of receiving wages and
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according to
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the salespeople's sales is profitable for the recruiting firm, I am not convinced that
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a trend will assist sellers' benefits
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costumers' convenience and validity
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what I have mentioned.

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