Creative artists should always have the freedom to express their ideas (in paintings, books, films, and songs) in any way they wish. The government should not restrict what they do. To what extent do you agree with the opinion?

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These days, innovative and creative artists enjoy so much of
freedom
compared to the past and their views and ideas are expressed through several forms
such
as paintings, magazines, movies, video songs, and social media. Personally, I strongly believe that the
government
should control the artists' expression if it affects
certain group
Suggestion
a certain group
of people or their religious beliefs or faith.
This
essay will discuss the aspect of why the
government
should restrict the
freedom
of expression, through the examples from Harvard
Education
Suggestion
Educational
Review research and Oxford University experiments to demonstrate the points.
To begin
with, all artists are generally very expressive, and they
also
enjoy drawing attention through controversial opinions.
Further
, they
also
publish their views through social media
such
as Facebook, Twitter, Instragram and
Youtube
Suggestion
YouTube
video blogs
to reach
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reach
widened audience group.
Although
many governments encourage
such
creativity, sometimes these views hurt the religious beliefs or induce racism or even those views could be offensive.
Such
unthoughtful
exhibiting insight or clear and deep perception
insightful
, creative ideas lead to chaotic conditions in several countries, where people indulge in demolishing statues, destroy public and private properties as a response to published opinions, which lead to disastrous economic conditions. Consistent with
this
thought process, Harvard Education Research recently published an article comparing USA with other countries where, the unrestricted
freedom
had led to violence, and increased the
government
expenditure by 5% because of
such
freedom
of speech.
In addition
to
this
, the reach and impact of artists are much higher than ever today.
Hence
, any views expressed in any mode would affect the country's economy on a massive scale.
For example
, if there is no peace in a country, because of
such
views continuously being expressed by the artists, would lead to the deterioration of capital investment from other countries.
Moreover
,
such
implications will have a greater impact in nations GDP growth and
hence
governments should restrict the artists' creativity within certain limits. Consistent with the same line of thinking, Oxford University conducted an experiment with various investors and obtained their views on the characteristics of the countries they would invest which revealed that, more than 70% of the investors have selected the countries where law and order was maintained perfectly. To conclude from the aforementioned views and examples, I firmly believe that the
government
should ensure the
freedom
of thought process within certain boundaries, as
otherwise
, the law and order in any country would be out of control. Most of the nations exercise
such
controls to ensure the security, peace and wellness of people, which is predicted to have a longer impact in the nation's economy and people's life.
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