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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Study plays an essential role in the adolescent life. But some students have to do part-time work during their academic session.
Therefore
, learners spend less time on their course as well as they feel pressurized. There are several factors responsible for
this
 problem which I will explicate in the essay and suggest some ways forward. The
first
 reason is that few scholars are not having any support from their parents for studies.
Thus
, they have to effort somewhere to deposit fees. To cite an example, a large population of the India lives under the poverty line.
Therefore
, that families are not able to cover higher learning expenses.
Moreover
, some of the adolescent have lure to buy expensive gadgets which have direct influence on the habit of doing a part-time task during the study.
Furthermore
, the trend of go to abroad for getting higher academic study
also
 increased the count of short term workers during education. The solutions are simple. All we need is the support of students from the authorities and citizens of the
country
. The
first
 solution is that the students need to be aware about the importance of education.
Thus
, their mind does not incline towards making money so scholars can focus on their academics.
Moreover
, International students need to be supported by their home provincial officials.
Therefore
, a focus can be done to study rather than work that can lead to a betterment of the home nation.
For example
, In Canada, the international students from the Arab countries are getting financial aid from their home
country
. I pen down by saying that the future of every
country
 will be in the hand is of today scholars
therefore
 there is a need of support for students by the Governments and public of every
country
 so they can focus on their training rather than work.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial necessity
  • Tuition
  • Living costs
  • Employability
  • Work experience
  • Under pressure
  • Mismanagement
  • Time-management
  • Academic pursuits
  • Flexible part-time study
  • Financial aid
  • Scholarships
  • Bursaries
  • Collaboration
  • Integrated programs
  • Education
  • Work-life balance
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