Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Globally, it is apparent
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everybody that the meals system is very important for our lifestyle, because it seriously affects our habits, health and even mood. Everyone is trying to find their own way: follow some special diets, avoid allergic products or totally do not eat something,
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any animal products. In my opinion,
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issue is very personal and we cannot identify
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phenomenon only as a positive or just a negative feature, because there are so many hidden, controversial and at the same time salient details. Overall, vegetarianism is full of advantages – we always hear many positive opinions about unusual feelings, health improvements and different activities connected with environmental protection.
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, sometimes these people are extremely enthusiastic or even aggressive against people who do not follow their way.
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, several years ago by Russian media revealed a story about a child in a vegetarian family and he had a very serious disease and his parents did not pay attention to him and
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he ended up in the hospital and the government had had their parental authority withdrawn. On the one hand, a meatless way of life helps the environment, because it reduces livestock production, which in turn affects the amount of greenhouse gases and it is very important
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the fight against global warming.
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, there is an opposite effect – with an increase of a vegetarianism trend, the pressure on agricultural production
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increases, as well as the fact that they cannot provide for the inhabitants so much fresh plant products and eventually they use a lot of chemical growth promoters and other marketing ploys.
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, one of the loveliest products among vegetarians is tofu, and
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in Latin America forests cutting down trees, because they do not have enough space for cultivation.
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, as for animals, an incredible number of them die during agricultural work.
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, I would like to stress that everywhere needs a balance. Any changes to one or
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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
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side tend to have destructive results. Looking towards the future, it is no doubt a given, that in alignment with current vegetarian trends it can only be the case, that it will not lose its relevance and will be popular for a long time, but for
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case humanity must remain
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Plant-based diet
  • Chronic diseases
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Deforestation
  • Water consumption
  • Mitigate climate change
  • Natural resources
  • Animal welfare
  • Humane and ethical choice
  • Healthcare costs
  • Sustainable farming
  • Legumes
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
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