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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, modern technologies have evolved a lot and it is almost impossible to find anybody who has never used the Internet. In my opinion, definitely, a global network is one of the most powerful, significant and useful means of
information
, which is able to provide for us any necessary features, but I do not think that it is a credible resource for data search. On the one hand, many people think that the Internet is the perfect place for
information
 retrieval. Overall, it is true, because we are able to find everything about
four corners
Suggestion
the four corners
 of the world, we have infinite access
for
Suggestion
to
 any
information
 or we can organise our leisure time with on-line cinema or some applications. Globally, there are many different websites and some of them are provided by famous universities, libraries, scientific organizations and other reliable sources, which we can absolutely trust.
On the other hand
, the Internet is full of poor-quality data and it always needs additional checking.
For instance
, everybody knows Wikipedia as one of the most popular multilingual Internet resources, which is created by people around the globe.
Consequently
, because of
this
 “edited by anyone at any time” model, it has resulted in unreliable
information
. Overall, there is so much data, that even reliable and major resources are not truly serious about providing them
information
, because they are fighting for power of media influence and to be
first
.
Finally
, I would like to conclude that the concept from Wikipedia “verifiability, not truth” describes precisely not just the model of
this
 resource, but the whole global network.
Although
 it gives us a lot of opportunities, but at the same time requires more thoroughness, concentration and analysis from us,
then
 other means of
information
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Democratize access
  • Instant messaging
  • Real-time conversations
  • Credible sources
  • Misinformation
  • Unverified facts
  • Reputable news outlets
  • Biased opinions
  • Algorithm-driven content
  • Overreliance
  • Traditional methods
  • Search engines
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