Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing taffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree. What measure do you think might be effective.

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The

traffic

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as well as the

pollution

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became a huge issue today. Some are of

belive

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believing

believe

belief

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that the higher taxes on the

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not carefully or expertly made

crude

oil should

helps

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help

to remedy the challenges. I differ to the viewport to a large extent. Some visible steps are

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in or at that place

there

to resolve the condition. Both, justification as well as effective measure

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is discussed

are discussed

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. Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is that the

pollution

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not only spread by

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vechicle

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a vehicle

vehicle

the vehicle

vehicles

, various

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sources

pollution

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are there

such

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as industries, dumping area, mines and

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much

more. In

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urban area

traffica

the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time

traffic

is mostly influenced by the

strey

a message that tells the particulars of an act or occurrence or course of events; presented in writing or drama or cinema or as a radio or television program

story

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and careless driving of people.

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traffic

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police is not serious

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about his

about he

jam and it eventually leads to

pollution

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exhausted

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from

the vehicle engine.

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the hike in the cost of the gasoline push up the price of

transportion

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

and

then

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things

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the things

that we

use

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daily because more costly.

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, a few

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can really help to overcome the situation. The most important step is the more wider road, the less

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the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time

traffic

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jam.

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The government

Government

should have to make

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a road

the road

wider to

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find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of

solve

the

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problem

also

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the strict rules should be needed regarding to

parking

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park

on the road side.

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, the

dentention

a state of being confined (usually for a short time)

detention

of vehicle after some age is

helps

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helping

to reduce

pollution

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caused by vehicle activity.

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contrast people

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contrast, people

should have

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an emphasis

emphasis

on the

use

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of public

transport which

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transport, which

useful to remedy both

the issue

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the traffic issue

traffic

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as well as

pollution

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can adopt some

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as odd-even rules, a cycle day, other resource of energy and more can pooling is a better way to reach

same piece

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the same piece

rather than to go above.

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to sum up it can be said that the hike in the cost of fuel oil is not the solution. It is our

resposibility

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

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to follow

the rules and

use

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the public transport it is possible to

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use again in altered form

rework

revoke

the

mentioed

make reference to

mentioned

issues.

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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