Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing taffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree. What measure do you think might be effective.

#price #petrol #taffic #pollution #measure

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traffic

as well as the

pollution

became a huge issue today. Some are of

belive

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believing

believe

belief

Bolivia

that the higher taxes on the

cruid

not carefully or expertly made

crude

oil should

helps

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help

to remedy the challenges. I differ to the viewport to a large extent. Some visible steps are

therer

in or at that place

there

to resolve the condition. Both, justification as well as effective measure

are discused

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is discussed

are discussed

further

. Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is that the

pollution

not only spread by

use

vechicle

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a vehicle

vehicle

the vehicle

vehicles

, various

source

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sources

pollution

are there

such

as industries, dumping area, mines and

many

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much

more. In

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urban area

traffica

the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time

traffic

is mostly influenced by the

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and careless driving of people.

On the other hand

traffic

police is not serious

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about his

about he

jam and it eventually leads to

pollution

exhausted

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from

the vehicle engine.

In addition

the hike in the cost of the gasoline push up the price of

transportion

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

and

then

things

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the things

that we

use

daily because more costly.

However

, a few

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mouse

can really help to overcome the situation. The most important step is the more wider road, the less

trafiic

the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time

traffic

tragic

jam.

Goverment

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The government

Government

should have to make

road

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a road

the road

wider to

slove

find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of

solve

the

traffic

problem

also

the strict rules should be needed regarding to

parking

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park

on the road side.

However

, the

dentention

a state of being confined (usually for a short time)

detention

of vehicle after some age is

helps

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helping

to reduce

pollution

caused by vehicle activity.

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contrast, people

should have

emphasig

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an emphasis

emphasis

on the

use

of public

transport which

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transport, which

useful to remedy both

the issue

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the traffic issue

traffic

as well as

pollution

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can adopt some

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techniques

such

as odd-even rules, a cycle day, other resource of energy and more can pooling is a better way to reach

same piece

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the same piece

rather than to go above.

Thus

to sum up it can be said that the hike in the cost of fuel oil is not the solution. It is our

resposibility

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

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to follow

the rules and

use

the public transport it is possible to

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use again in altered form

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revoke

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mentioned

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