Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Malls in my country are a rather new phenomena, the
first
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of which opened in my 7th standard, since
then
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, plethora of one-stop-shops have opened up, announcing how well India
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Accept space
(
my country of
resisdence
any address at which you dwell more than temporarily
residence
)
have welcomed
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has welcomed
it with open arms. Certainly there are immense positive aspects of these
super markets
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarkets
, to point a
few
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little
, the ease of buying and returning, fixed price culture and branded products all under one roof. It is no wonder that in most of the western
countries
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country
store giants like Costco, Walmart
have almost taken
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has almost taken
over the shopping landscape. The local markets too are surviving due to their vital differences that sets them apart from their big bosses, it is that they are closer to residences of people and are more people friendly.
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, the local dress seller probably knows you and your locality and
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for him
its
it is
it's
easy to understand your taste. For me, I prefer to shop locally because of the accessibility and trust. Buying local
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means you are helping your own locality and not someone who is living in a
forgien
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
land and calling the shots.
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