Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loos of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is no doubt that environmental issues
become
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have become
one of the most controversial issues today. On one side, it is often believed that the primary reason for
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issue comes under the endangered species from animals as well as the loss of particular plants. On the other side, they commonly believed that there are a number of significant problems
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as,
industry
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and pollution factors. In my opinion, I believed,
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both sides affect the
environment
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, but the
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side is more serious than the
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one. 
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, to hold the view that claims the extinction of animals and lack of special plants are the main issue that affected the
environment
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. To illustrate that, nowadays people are concentrating on the technology rather than nature as well as natural resources.
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, they are burning the forests and cutting the edge in order to particular reason in
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industry
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the industry
an industry
.
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, they do not protect endangered animals like lion, bears and elephants, which makes us aware about the importance of existent of these spices. So, the
problem
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is considered as an acute
problem
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for the
environment
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.
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, to take the view that claims there are more serious environmental issues
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as,
industry
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and all sorts of pollutions as well as some population’s behaviour are equally important problems as they lead to destroying the
environment
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. To clarify
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point, in the current time
industry
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poses a
problem
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for the
environment
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because it causes a global warming.
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, both air and water pollution is
equally effect
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an equal effect
equal effect
on the
environment
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.
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, suffering from some behaviours like littering in the street or in the public parks,
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is considered as a major
problem
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because without cooperation between public and government we cannot solve the
problem
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. In conclusion, while the extinction of animals and loosing particular species of plants should be taken as important reasons of environmental
problem
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,
therefore
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,
industry
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, pollution and human conductions must be taken in the consideration as the main problems. So, I believe we should focus on the problems and try to fix them in order to protect our
environment
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.
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