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Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays, it is true that people have different sources to know the news all over the world,
such
 as surfing on the Internet, watching TV, reading
newspaper
Suggestion
the newspaper
newspapers
a newspaper
. Some people believed that even Internet increasingly becomes an important channel for receiving
information
, traditional
newspaper
 still be the most major media for readers to gain the news. While there are some benefits from
newspaper
, I believed that websites could widely expand the tunnel of gaining
information
.
Firstly
, people think that
newspaper
 will remain the most important source of news is because of
this
 form of communication could cover all groups of age, especially those older people who are inability of learning new technology.
For example
, elder people do not know how to use the Internet access due to the difficulties of operating smartphones or computers and the font is too small for them.
Secondly
, news from traditional paper media could represent the opinions of officials, so that a good communication bridge could build up between nations and governments.
Finally
,
newspaper
Suggestion
a newspaper
the newspaper
 could sell to the remoted area where Internet signals could not reach, especially the countries could not afford the establishment of related facilities.
However
, I disagreed that paper media still are the main position of the source of news.
This
 is because the speed of spreading
information
 is much faster than the traditional rival.
For instance
, when a car accident happens on the street, reporters could share
this
 news immediately on the Internet and
this
 report will read by millions in a
second
. Thanks to the development of technology, by the usage of smartphone, computer and tablet, people could know what is going on at any time from the screens.
By contrast
,
newspaper
Suggestion
newspapers
 could be delaying the
information
, people only receive the news one day or even several days after. In conclusion, it is essential that the existence of
newspaper
 plays an important role for readers to receive news.
However
, I believed that the invention of the Internet could bring people to the
next
 level of the era of
information
.
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