Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

In today's century television is popular amongst everyone. It is no more a
luxory
something that is an indulgence rather than a necessity
luxury
, but a necessity.In
this
essay
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I will share my viewpoint and examples that would help us understand, how television is one the most important electronic device, which helps people to get
information
across the globe and
also
a sole partner for
few people
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a few people
. Now-a-days, there are different channels and media sources. Due to
globalaisation
growth to a global or worldwide scale
globalization
globalisation
and technology development, it is really easy to access news from different sources. The news goes viral and spreads like a fire in the forest.
This
has its own advantages and disadvantages. We do get
information
very quickly, but not all the
information
is correct.
For example
, the updates of Corona virus can be accessed easily. We can know the no of cases in different countries just by
click
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the click
a click
of a remote button.
secondly
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Secondly
, people get updates on how to prevent the virus, which is helping people to be aware about it.
Moreover
, there are many people in the world
,
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,
who stay away from their families for multiple reasons, for them Television is a family member. They spent
lot
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lots
of time watching movies, songs, news updates and so on.
Lastly
, these days there are different applications available
,
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,
which help people to watch
variety
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a variety
of
programms
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
programmers
and help people to defeat the boredom. To
conculde
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
coincide
concede
, from all the above examples and situations
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,
we can say that Television is
defiently
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
an important part of everyone's life to get the
information
and
also
a friend for
few
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a few
the few
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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