some people claim that government should take action to ensure that people have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, believe that people should decide which way they prefer to leave their lives.what’s your opinion?

It is important to consider whether

ametur

someone who pursues a study or sport as a pastime

amateur

artists need to be subsidised.

Although

some

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that

governmets

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

take initiative to provide fiscal support to unskilled artists, I,

personally consider

Accept comma addition

personally, consider

they

objective case of they

them

would be subsidised by another

resourses

available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

resource

.

This

essay will discuss both sides of

arguement

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the argument

argument

an argument

arguments

and give

opinion

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an opinion

opinions

in the later part of the essay. Those who argue that these artists,

such

as street painters and dancers need to be financed by governmental agencies.

This

is because of

painters

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the painters

who turn negative aura of old street into

positive one

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a positive one

positive ones

by painting walls and old buildings.

Similarly

, street musicians and dancers' performance often attract tourists and visitors and entertained them significantly.

Therefore

, their contributions to the society cannot be

neglacted

disregarded

neglected

and they would be funded by their government itself. While these

unprofessionals

not characteristic of or befitting a profession or one engaged in a profession

unprofessional

can be granted some financial assistance to some extent, the ultimate solution may be given by

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

resources. If any government start to finance

these sector

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this sector

these sectors

, can be

burden

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a burden

to a huge number of taxpayers. Apart from

this

, the money can be better spent on the vital areas,

for instance

, health, education and public transport. In conclusion, even though talented artist is

a

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an

unavoidable part of our society, I consider they can be given sufficient fiscal support by alternative agencies rather than

govermental

relating to or dealing with the affairs or structure of government or politics or the state

governmental

agencies.