Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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The way we purchase different product is greatly driven by the

nowadays.

However

, some people argue that, branding of the products motivate people to buy the items which they do not require whereas

on the other hand

, it enables us to buy the right product as well as throw light on the latest products and I agree with

this

point of view.

To begin

with,

firstly

, the promotion of a product plays an essential role in the era of the 21st century, in which there is cut throat competition between the companies to gain the

market

share. It will help the companies to gain popularity of their products to its customers as well as to enhance their

market

share by reaching to a new customer base.

For instance

, if we consider the business of mobiles and other electronic gadets, there is very high level of competition between the business, and in these tremendous fight between organizations,

emerge as a boom for them and it enables them to share their products on different platform like, internet, media, newspaper and lot more ultimatly, benefitting the users.

Therefore

helps people to find and know about different products.

Secondly

helps the user to know the latest products, technology which is available in the

market

This

can be done by doing publicity of the products, launching the products on the famous platform, collaborating with the companies which are famous.

For example

, many small business makes a variety of products which are not known by the people, these small institution float their products on major platform like Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, by which their items are known by the people and the user

also

get the knowledge about the useful things which are available in the

market

Thus

, we can say that,

plays a vital role for the branding of the products and letting the customers know it. In conclusion,

is very powerful tool by which businesses as well as people are getting benefitted as they get to know new products without doing much hard work as well as knowledge about the latest development in the

market

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Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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