You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people who can help renovate the building and also help with some activities. Write a letter to the principal of the school and say – How would you be able to help? – When and why would you do it? – Who will help you to do it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I was one of the visitors to the
school
last
week. I had a great weekend and writing to let you know that school
needs renovation and some Correct article usage
the school
activities
, willing to help my colleagues.
I noticed that second
building wall paintings are completely washed away and Correct article usage
the second
physical
teacher will be on leave for Correct article usage
the physical
next
two months. I am part of the Social Club of our company and we regularly Correct article usage
the next
carry-out
some Correct your spelling
carry out
activities
to help in the community. With your permission
it is a pleasure to help the Add a comma
,permission
school
and enrich our locality.
On Saturdays, we can conduct some of the activities
for kids like games, sports and excursions. We will ensure to take care of the activities
planned by trainee
on Add an article
the trainee
this
day. Similarly
, we can paint on Sundays where there won't be a school
and can avoid any potential damage to the kids.
I Have already discussed with my club mates of
the above plan and are excited to Change preposition
apply
do
. We will make a detailed plan for the Correct pronoun usage
itdo
next
two months with volunteers and shall share if
you permit us.
Awaiting Correct pronoun usage
it if
for
your confirmation.
Yours Sincerely,
SumanthChange preposition
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite