Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative atibe impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.

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In recent years, use of the social networking sites

are cosiderably increasing

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is considerably increasing

are considerably increasing

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many people think these sites are affecting society and

individulas

a human being

individuals

individual

negatively, others believe these are the best way to communicate.

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essay will cover both views and explains why it has more advantages. In many ways, these sites are proofing as boom for the society and individuals.

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, as these sites work on the internet,

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, people can access these from anywhere and it is cost effective

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. Through these, it becomes distinctly easy to communicate with friends or relatives, who are far away from you.

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, through these sites, I connected with my college friends, who are even in different countries.

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, on the special occasions, people can greet others through messages. On the other side, due to the incorrect usage of these sites, it is affecting negatively both individuals and the society.

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, people create fake profiles to perform some criminal activities. Some people use these to publish illegal contents.

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, some people become

addict

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addicted

to these sites and they spend

most time

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more time

on these

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of being productive. In conclusion, the advantages

are more than the disadvantages and surely benefits outweigh

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outweigh more than the disadvantages and surely benefits

are more than the disadvantages and surely benefits outweigh

the detriments.

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, the drawbacks can be overcome by having some restrictions

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the usage.

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depression
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interpersonal skills
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identity theft
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Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative atibe impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.

Your opinion

You are invited to a party, however, because of some reasons you didn’t attend. Write a letter to the friend who invites you: (1) explain the reason why you didn’t go; (2) express your apology; (3) ask about some details in the party.

Some people say that supermarkets should have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell. Others say it is the resposibility of the consumers to avoid such products. Discuss and give your opinion.

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