Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative atibe impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.
In recent years, use of the social networking
is
considerably increasing. Wrong verb form
has been
Although
many people
think these sites
are affecting society and individuals negatively, others believe these are the best way to communicate. This
essay will cover both views and explains
why it has more advantages.
In many ways, these Correct subject-verb agreement
explain
sites
are proofing as
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a
the
society and individuals. Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, as these sites
work on the internet, thus
, people
can access these
from anywhere and it is Correct pronoun usage
them
cost effective
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cost-effective
also
. Through these, it becomes distinctly easy to communicate with friends or relatives, who are far away from you. For example
, through these sites
, I connected with my college friends, who are even in different countries. Moreover
, on the
special occasions, Correct article usage
apply
people
can greet others through messages.
On the other side, due to
the incorrect usage of these sites
, it
is affecting negatively both individuals and Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, people
create fake profiles to perform some
criminal activities. Some Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
use these to publish illegal contents
. Fix the agreement mistake
content
Moreover
, some people
become addicted to these sites
and they spend more time on these
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them
instead
of being productive.
In conclusion, the advantages outweigh more than the disadvantages and surely benefits
the detriments. Verb problem
outweigh
However
, the drawbacks can be overcome by having some restrictions on the usage.Submitted by pjoshi on
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task achievement
Try to integrate examples that are more detailed and specific to better back up your main points.
coherence cohesion
Work on transitions between ideas to enhance the logical flow of the essay.
coherence cohesion
Ensure all points are equally developed throughout your essay, not just introducing them.
task achievement
The essay successfully addresses both sides of the argument, demonstrating a balanced viewpoint.
coherence cohesion
The essay contains a clear introduction and conclusion, contributing to its organization.
coherence cohesion
You maintain a generally good structure that supports the argument logically, especially with the introduction and conclusion helping to frame the discussion.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
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