Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity, some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.?

Art is the externalization of the skills of an
artist
.
Therefore there
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Therefore, there
are people who are in favour to provide full liberty to the
artist
,
however
, others oppose
this
opinion freely. In my opinion, freedom is
neccessary but
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necessary, but
necessary but
it should be given up to an extent, and proper
servallience
close observation of a person or group (usually by the police)
surveillance
to avoid any unpleasant situation. There are many
reason
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reasons
why people in favour of the
artist
to provide him full support to express his feelings with full liberty.
Artist
are the one who can express his thoughts by observing everything which is happening within his
sorroundings
the environmental condition
surroundings
using his creativity of art.
Firstly
, using his
art
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artistic
skills he can pass the social message to the people and to the authorities what is currently happening in the
society
.
Secondly
, these messages will help
goverment
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the government
government
or the specific authorities to take appropriate
messures
determine the measurements of something or somebody, take measurements of
measures
to
the the
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the
improvements.
Lastly
, all his messages
also reach
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also reaches
has also reached
is also reaching
to the people of the
society
which encourage themselves to resolve the issues own their own.
On the other hand
, sometimes these messages
also
create unexpected situations
between
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among
the people.
For Example
:
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:
- One of the
artist
presented the
hindu
of or relating to or supporting Hinduism
Hindu
gods as beggars to pass the message to the
society
that gods
does not want
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do not want
any money to survive so stop spending money on temples
instead
provide something good for the others needy people. These pictures created unexpected thoughts
in
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on
with
some of the
people which
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people, which
resulted
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the
roits
the condition of belonging to a particular place or group by virtue of social or ethnic or cultural lineage
roots
riots
ruts
like condition in some of the states of the country. To conclude, the
artist
should be given certain
priviledges
a special advantage or immunity or benefit not enjoyed by all
privileges
,
however before
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however, before
publishing his art work to the
society
proper inspection to be done by the officials so that that message should not result into some difficult condition in any area which may lead to demise of innocent people.
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