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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their study in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

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Tough the education system improved and access more people from the past to now, some children struggle to focus on their studies in school.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will discuss the main cause of the problem, and
secondly
 will give suggestions on how to address the problem. On the one hand, the main cause of children experiencing difficulties with a concentration on the lesson is that they involve in some family affairs. The number of children
can not
can not
cannot
 live their childhood properly, and suffer from family troubles like separation of their parents, financial hardship, and so on.
Thus
, these problems have a strong influence on the psychology of children and in
this
 case, they
can not
can not
cannot
 focus on their lesson and think only about the future of their family.
For instance
, kids with divorced parents show lower test scores than kids with parents who are still married.
On the other hand
, the solution to
this
problem complicated,
Suggestion
complicated problem,
 but feasible. Tough all families
can not
can not
cannot
 get a divorce or having a good relationship with each-others all the time, they ought to deal with their all problems in a special way in which their children do not affect.
Therefore
, they should always prioritize their kid and cherish their
child's
Suggestion
child
 psychology and education. If they can not handle these kinds of situations by themselves, they have to consult with experts. In
this
 instance, children who
know
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know, although
although
 their parents divorced, both of them love him, they focus their lesson more commonly and try to
proud
to push against gently
prod
 their both parents. In conclusion, family problems like divorcing parents and financial hardship caused trouble with the focus on the study of children in school, the parents ought to deal with their all problems in a special way on which their kids do not affect due to the solving concentration problems.
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