As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
The
number
of people purchase their own vehicles for transportation, is directly proportional Use synonyms
with
the development as it indicates how well-developed a country is. Some would argue that Suggestion
to
increasing
Suggestion
an increasing number
number
of cars help to Use synonyms
detoriate
the environment faster, but others say make more attractive by adding ornament, colour, etc.
decorate
this
is not related. According to my personal opinion, I strongly believe that Linking Words
environment
is deeply affected by the Suggestion
the environment
number
of personal automobiles as not only Use synonyms
this
makes traffic slower and increase noise Linking Words
pollution
, but Use synonyms
also
helps for more carbon compounds Linking Words
emmison
.
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emissions
To begin
with, if the traffic movement is slow, it can create a lot of noise Linking Words
pollution
with Use synonyms
more temperature increase
of Suggestion
a more temperature increase
the more temperature increase
environmrnt
. To elaborate, the owners of personal motors the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
are often tend
to Suggestion
often tend
be have
less patience and do honking. behave in a certain manner; show a certain behavior; conduct or comport oneself
behave
Additionally
, they don't even care for surrounding and sometimes give Linking Words
horn
Suggestion
horns
infront
of schools or hospitals, resulting in Suggestion
in front
such
a sound. Linking Words
which
is way more than our tolerable decibel. Suggestion
Which
Moreover
, if there are more Linking Words
number
of four-wheelers in a limited space, that Use synonyms
also
help in increasing environmental temperature. Linking Words
For example
, in winter season these days, it is felt that weather is not as chilled as it once was due to the excessive Linking Words
pollution
from Use synonyms
large
Suggestion
a large number
number
of Use synonyms
vechicles
.
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
On the other hand
, more personal cars Linking Words
means
more fuel Suggestion
mean
consumtions
and that can lead to destroy nature in an indirect way. Till now, most of the vehicles are driven by fossil fuel and the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
this
works as Linking Words
acceleratent
for an increase in rate of change
acceleration
pollution
and destroys our Use synonyms
limtied
quantity of small in range or scope
limited
this
bio-fuel. According to Linking Words
recent study
, it is observed that the quantity of national resource is more degraded in Suggestion
a recent study
recent studies
UK
than other under-developed countries and Suggestion
the UK
that is
directly Linking Words
releated
to massive numbers of personal automobiles.
To conclude, despite all benefits, our being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics
related
surronudings
are getting destroyed gradually by our own motors and no one should deny it. I would suggest, that the the environmental condition
surroundings
transporation
department should be more strict while issuing new a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
registartions
and car makers should produce more the act of enrolling
registrations
registration
eco
friendly vehicles.Suggestion
Eco
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...