Since the beginning of the 20th century, the number of endangered species has increased significantly and we have witnessed more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time. State some reasons for this and provide possible solutions.

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During the beginning of the 20th century

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Most of the wildlife species are being at risk

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The reason behind

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extinctions is because of animal poaching,

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however hunting

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however, hunting

animals illegally should be strictly prohibited and there should be a strict action to avoid

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kind of illegal activities. A strict process should be taken against people who regularly involve themselves in trapping the innocent species, Habit is an unacceptable reason for humans who choose to do

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there are several people in fact even politicians are involved in

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movement, A strong judgement should be taken over

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people in order to save the animals.

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example, we have only few tigers left in our country if the situation going to be the same,

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we lose them like how we lost dinosaurs. In my point of view those who kill animals and try to avoid them completely, they should be sentenced to a punishment Where others would have a

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thought to repeat the same. There should be an ethical relationship with the natural environment for human beings.

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couple of months before

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a pregnant female elephant died by eating a pineapple stuffed with crackers in Kerala. The government took severe action against the culprits. The people behind

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crime can face a maximum of seven years in jail. To conclude, All the living wildlife has equal rights to to have their life in their place and they deserve their environment as others. We should treat them on a humanity basis.

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Topic Vocabulary:

endangered species
mass extinctions
biodiversity
ecosystems
ecological imbalance
human well-being
illegal hunting
poaching
habitat destruction
climate change
awareness
education
conservation
laws
regulations
international cooperation
sustainable practices
protected areas
public awareness
community-based conservation efforts

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Since the beginning of the 20th century, the number of endangered species has increased significantly and we have witnessed more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time. State some reasons for this and provide possible solutions.

Your opinion

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many customs and traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to modern life and not worth keeping. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries, it is possible to buy a wide variety of foods, which have been transported from all over the world. Do the benefits of this development outweigh its drawbacks?