More and more people are becoming serious overweight. Some people think that a solution can be to increase the price of fattening food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a considerable number of people are gaining
weight
significantly. It is thought by some that a surge in the cost of
food
items that cause obesity, is the possible way to
takle
accept as a challenge
tackle
this
problem. In my opinion, I consider that overweight issue of people can not be mitigated by
price increase
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the price increase
price increases
of products because people's yearning for those
food
products is difficult to control.
To begin
, these days people enticed by junk fast
food
and various other products that are responsible for
tremendous
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the tremendous weight gain
weight
gain. Some people believe that rise in the price of these junk
food
could dissuade people to buy these things but I disagree due to several reasons. People, who love to eat junk
food
, purchase these
food
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foods
regardless of their cost.
For example
, if someone is addicted to drink fizzy soft drink that contain high
sugar
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sugar, such
such
as, Coke,
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as Coke,
Pepsi and several others,
then
person
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a person
people
the person
could
not stop drinking of
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not stop drinking
these drinks
evenafter
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even after
surge
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the surge
in their prices.
Moreover
, these days, people are leading highly
paced extremely
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paced, extremely
busy life with
hectic schedule
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a hectic schedule
hectic schedules
and they are having considerable less time to cook,
therefore
, they love to order
food
items from fast
food
outlets that adversely affect their health.
For instance
, due to shortage of time, people generally buy Pizza, Burger
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
, from
resturants
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restaurant
restraints
and
this
habit of regularly having these meals, has a
deterimental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
impact on physical and mental well being. In conclusion, people think that the price increase of obesity causing products, could effectively control
weight
gain, but I believe that
this
can not control the concerning issue of
weight
gain. To tackle
this
problem,
government
Suggestion
the government
should provide awareness about the harmful effects of some
food
items on health.
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