More and more people are becoming serious overweight. Some people think that a solution can be to increase the price of fattening food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, a considerable number of people are gaining
weight
significantly. It is thought by some that a surge in the cost of food
items that cause obesity, is the possible way to takle
accept as a challenge
tackle
this
problem. In my opinion, I consider that overweight issue of people can not be mitigated by price increase
of products because people's yearning for those Suggestion
the price increase
price increases
food
products is difficult to control.
To begin
, these days people enticed by junk fast food
and various other products that are responsible for tremendous
Suggestion
the tremendous weight gain
weight
gain. Some people believe that rise in the price of these junk food
could dissuade people to buy these things but I disagree due to several reasons. People, who love to eat junk food
, purchase these food
regardless of their cost. Suggestion
foods
For example
, if someone is addicted to drink fizzy soft drink that contain high sugar
Accept comma addition
sugar, such
such
as, Coke,
Pepsi and several others, Suggestion
as Coke,
then
person
could Suggestion
a person
people
the person
not stop drinking of
these drinks Suggestion
not stop drinking
evenafter
Suggestion
even after
surge
in their prices.
Suggestion
the surge
Moreover
, these days, people are leading highly paced extremely
busy life with Accept comma addition
paced, extremely
hectic schedule
and they are having considerable less time to cook, Suggestion
a hectic schedule
hectic schedules
therefore
, they love to order food
items from fast food
outlets that adversely affect their health. For instance
, due to shortage of time, people generally buy Pizza, Burger etc
, from continuing in the same way
etc.
resturants
and a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restaurant
restraints
this
habit of regularly having these meals, has a deterimental
impact on physical and mental well being.
In conclusion, people think that the price increase of obesity causing products, could effectively control (sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
weight
gain, but I believe that this
can not control the concerning issue of weight
gain. To tackle this
problem, government
should provide awareness about the harmful effects of some Suggestion
the government
food
items on health.Submitted by cool01 on
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