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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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Nowadays, students have the opportunity to study around the globe, not being limited to their home town and their
country
. In my opinion,
this
 valuable opportunity is very useful for all parties involved, as they all receive invaluable international
experience
, cultural exchange and new opportunities. Considering some disadvantages, it is worth highlighting that behind
this
 there is a strict selection and high costs and
as a result
,
this
experience
 does not always have practical application. In accordance with the positive aspects, it is definitely worth to note the main points that various parties receive
in
Suggestion
from
such
 programs. One of the brightest and most famous programs in Europe is “Erasmus”, which provides an opportunity to study, undergo an internship or teach in another
country
 participating in the program. Students are happy to travel to another
country
 to make new friends, live in an unfamiliar environment and develop language skills.
Additionally
, the countries are interested in the development of communication between each other, the transfer and receipt of
experience
 gained abroad and the general development of young professionals. As for the disadvantages, too much importance is attached to studying in other countries, and
therefore
 many Chinese, Indian and Arab families do their best to send their children to study abroad, and upon their return, the
experience
 gained does not always correspond to expectations and sometimes has no possibility of its practical application.
In addition
, it
also
 leads to a “brain drain”, since not all talented and motivated students want to return to their homeland. In conclusion, I would like to emphasize, that in general
this
 trend has a positive impact on the educational system and it is able to help all participants expand their horizons, gain new knowledge and language skills. In the future,
such
 programs will be more and more popular and in demand, as well as possibly become more accessible to students and have more opportunities for application in the student's home
country
.
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