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Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

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Nowadays, we can see the great improvement in the health industry.
As a result
, people about sixty five years old and older have the possibility to live more actively. In the following easy
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 will take a look
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 the
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advantages
advantageous
 for the modern society wish they can have because of
this
 situation. It is true that with all
this
 medical and society improvements
such
 as
transplantology
, 3d printing of a humane organise and drugs we can live more and the biggest advantages to it is that we can have an active life after the age of thirty-five. People in
this
 age do not have to suffer anymore from a lot of diseases, they can
work
 or travel or even do sports.   In my opinion the biggest profit for society is that
old
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older
 people have the possibility to
work
. Everything is connected with jobs in our world. Of course, if we can see deeply it is not just
work
 it is money. When people
work
 they pay taxes, they buy cars and  clothes to go to
work
, they book houses for holidays and all these things are
produse
bring forth or yield
produce
 money to a lot of industry. It sounds really
kapitalistik
, but it is the world where we all live.  I strongly believe that we can use
this
 as advantages. I think with all
this
 money we can reach even bigger results in medicine, science and regular life. I hope, It is a good opportunity for a new generation to have a long and interesting
life even
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life, even
 after the age of sixty-five.
Submitted by Irina on

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