In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays we can see a really interesting and modern trend that many people 
use
more and more  pictures
instead
 of usual text.  Obviously, it is a new step in communication for all human society and we have to accept it and add
this
 into our lives.   It is true that people already send  tons of pictures to each other every day, but how do we come to
this
?
First
of all it starts with the internet and the
smailes
change one's facial expression by spreading the lips, often to signal pleasure
smiles
. Back in the days people were thinking about how to explain their feelings and emotions
such
as happiness, sadness and  smile by texting
.
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.
So the answer was found pretty quickly, it was smileys symbols which people started to
use
instead
of a long explanation about what they have in mind. Nowadays, computers and mobile phones have become a big part of our lives. Doubtlessly we
use
it for many reasons and we see that it is not enough to express our feelings anymore. Nowadays, we want to see more and more pictures because they make our lives easier. 
For
instance  it
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instance, it
is much easier to send a picture of bread from the shop 
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
describe which one is it, black or white  with gluten or not. Of course the advertisement industry uses
this
technique as well, they always show us the best parts of any products. As a part of
this
field I
also
do pictures for real estate and people like it and
consequently
they buy houses. To put it simply, people always want to make their lives easier.
This
is how the progress works.
As a
result we
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result, we
see that we don't have to explain our feelings deeply, we can just send a smile or another 
emoji
an iconic mental representation
image
.  Customers don't have to imagine their future apartment any more nowadays, we have
technology
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the technology
 to show it even before it is being
bild
cooked in hot water
boiled
billed
built
. I believe that pictures are already part of our language and I hope that we can
use
it properly.
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