In some countries an increasing number of children are overweigh as a result of eating too much fast food. It is necessary for governments to ban selling this kind of food in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays, obesity is considered
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of the most controversial issues in the world especially for the children.
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of
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issue, it is argued by some that the government should start banning unhealthy
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in the schools. In my opinion, that would alleviate the
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problem but
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problem, but
not solve it. On
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hand, banning fast
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in schools is a reasonable solution for
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problem
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because schools, which are considered an educational environment, should give the priority of the child’s health.
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, they can make children aware about the importance of avoiding fast
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as it leads to the declined of common health
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such
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as, obesity and diabetes.
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, banning healthy
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such
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as chocolate, sweets, chips and soda in the canteen and offering other alternatives of healthy foods might encourage students to change their perceptions and protect themselves from diseases.
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, that would be
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action for
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problem
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.
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, it is often thought that banning these products in school, it will not solve the
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because eating fast
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is
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of the worst habits in a huge number of families. To illustrate that, if the government prevents schools to sail unhealthy
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without trying to fix the
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itself, it will not worth. To put it more simply, there are a number of families when they pick up their children from school, they go to restaurants. In my conclusion, it seems that
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solution is considered as a partial solution and it would not solve the entire issue. I believe to tackle
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, we must start from the families and give them serious recommendations about the importance of health for their offspring as well as they can protect them from real danger.
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