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In some countries an increasing number of children are overweigh as a result of eating too much fast food. It is necessary for governments to ban selling this kind of food in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays, obesity is considered
one
 of the most controversial issues in the world especially for the children.
As a result
 of
this
 issue, it is argued by some that the government should start banning unhealthy
food
 in the schools. In my opinion, that would alleviate the
problem but
Accept comma addition
problem, but
 not solve it. On
one
 hand, banning fast
food
 in schools is a reasonable solution for
this
problem
 because schools, which are considered an educational environment, should give the priority of the child’s health.
In other words
, they can make children aware about the importance of avoiding fast
food
 as it leads to the declined of common health
problem
such
 as, obesity and diabetes.
For example
, banning healthy
food
such
 as chocolate, sweets, chips and soda in the canteen and offering other alternatives of healthy foods might encourage students to change their perceptions and protect themselves from diseases.
However
, that would be
one
 action for
this
problem
.
On the other hand
, it is often thought that banning these products in school, it will not solve the
problem
 because eating fast
food
 is
one
 of the worst habits in a huge number of families. To illustrate that, if the government prevents schools to sail unhealthy
food
 without trying to fix the
problem
 itself, it will not worth. To put it more simply, there are a number of families when they pick up their children from school, they go to restaurants. In my conclusion, it seems that
this
 solution is considered as a partial solution and it would not solve the entire issue. I believe to tackle
this
problem
, we must start from the families and give them serious recommendations about the importance of health for their offspring as well as they can protect them from real danger.
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