After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing • Express your appreciation • And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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Dear Miss Kumari, I am writing

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letter to express my thankfulness

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involved in an accident. I feel

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is my new life and you have been the most important person in

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allow me to introduce myself. I am Pinky Vivek, whom you saved from

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accident one week ago. My car broke down

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middle of the road and a truck hit my car from the front. I was unconscious and you had taken to

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hospital

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. My right leg was badly fractured. I was admitted

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hospital

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for 2 days. Even though you did not know me, you still took care of me. I am really grateful to you for all

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, I would like to invite you and your family for dinner at my home

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Friday, 9th May. My family and I would like to thank you in person for taking good care of me and at the same

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we can enjoy a good meal together. I look forward to

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back from you. Yours faithfully, Pinky Vivek.

MKWed Aug 05 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
appreciation
subtly
kindness
assisted
heartfelt
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sacrifices
safety
comfort
invitation
eager
personal connection
reflecting
impact
reinforcing
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