Many parents, mostly mothers, stay at home to take care of the house and look after children. Many believe that the government should pay them a wage for this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that a great number of parents, especially women,

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to take parental leaves and become responsible for household duties. In my opinion, officials should support financially unemployed mothers and fathers, albeit make a list of requirements in order to help people adequately. A lot of families have been suffering due to the actions caused or, at least, not prevented by the government.

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might be war conflicts that high-level officials have escalated pursuing their political goals. To be precise, the Russian state decided to send its military forces to Chechnya more than two decades ago, mostly consisting of young men who were about or had started their own families.

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, local women have lost not only their loved

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parents of their children, and those events undermined mothers’ mental and financial stability.

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, they either chose to earn money letting their offspring without proper attention or fully devoted themselves to the process of upbringing. Another aspect of

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issue to consider is that some toddlers and adolescents require special assistance and pricy

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, obviously, is not affordable for the majority of families. By allocating funds, providing related policies and building health care facilities, the government makes another step to social equality.

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, it acquires respect for its own citizens and, highly likely, the global community.

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, countries with underdeveloped health care systems might follow

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example in order to seem progressive amongst their counterparts.

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, there are plenty of cases when individuals start exploiting the help that they receive from social institutions. To illustrate, the migrants in Sweden often have the reluctance to be employed and start bringing home the bacon due to bureaucracy and benefits that cover most of the possible needs.

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with commercial organizations have to pay more taxes, motivating businesses to migrate to other countries. To conclude, while some believe that the government should suspend providing homemakers with default incomes, I mostly disagree with

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statement because modern society is not about survival of the fittest.

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, any state will only benefit from

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practice in the long run, receiving professionals

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of misfits.

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, there should be strong

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, as some citizens might ask for more help than they actually need.