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In some countries, people encourage students to find part-time jobs while some people don't. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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With part-time
work
 at the school stage has been the controversial issue for years. In some nations, people promote their youngsters to have the
work
experience
 earlier, while others oppose
this
 statement.
However
, there are advantages and disadvantages in both of the sides, the idea of two views with my own opinion together will be
further
 discussed and elaborated in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, the practical
experience
 of
work
 would help pupils to learn the independence and responsibility. Whatever
work
 you do, there are some fundamental skills and characters are required like problem-solving, discretion, and punctuality.
For instance
, working as a waitress, you must have articulate communication with the smiling face, and being clam in any kind of situation.
Moreover
, the abilities of organizing and problem-solving are
also
 essential, as you have to deal with many complaints and chaos at the same time.
Therefore
, the
experience
 of the part-time job is the great lesson for youngsters to grow up as well as understanding how an authentic society like.
On the contrary
, some people might concern about the mental maturity of students is not sturdy enough to against the temptations of the surrounding and the potential pressure from the job. As the psychosocial development of students is still immature, their core value and ideology can be easily affected by the older colleagues or fellows. By example, an increasing number of teenage girls are fine with the job which are associated with pornography in order to get relatively higher compensation that enables them to have a
luxury
Suggestion
luxurious
 life.
Accordingly
, a lack of the capacity in students on right judgement and critical thinking has become the primary reason for the opponents. In conclusion, having
work
experience
 at the early age is great for students to become more independent and accountable, while there are some possible hazards and immense temptations exist in the adult world may mislead the juveniles.
However
, I personally believe that under the proper guidance and advice, the benefits that novices obtain from
work
 will be far more than its harms.
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