Some people believe that young people should follow the tradition of the society. Others however said they should be free to behave like individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undeniably true that the ways youngsters should behave has become a moot point. A growing number of people postulate that young people should adhere strictly to ancient cultural practices while other advocates dissent to

this

claim.

This

disquisition delves into the plus point as well as the pitfall and

subsequently

, will put forward my standpoint. Apparently, from one perspective, contenders

posits

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posit

that younglings should abide to societal norms of the older generation might have their justification. One crucial rationale is that it will limit juvenile

delinquencies which

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delinquencies, which

has experienced

meteoric rise

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a meteoric rise

in recent time. Put differently, misdeeds

such

as double homicides, rape and stealing may drastically experience a nosedive because those irrational

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

were not common in

olden days

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the olden days

when compared to present time. To epitomize, according to a published seminar paper by University College Cork, it was reported that 85% of

wrongdoings

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the wrongdoings

by

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of

tertiary students was attributed to them adopting westernized practices.

Thus

,

this

plural of "this"

these

supporters argue that relinquishing foreign culture has a boon point.

Conversely

, could the supporters who opine that young males and females should have volition in how they wish to act be right? Certainly, it follows that allowing them have

leads

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led

to freedom to live their youthful age.

In other words

, youths should experience a glimpse of everything they desire without restrictions. More so, the youthful moments will be enjoyed before transition to adulthood. To exemplify, according to Irish Times, 70% of adolescents claimed that allowing them adopt their choice of lifestyle enabled them to exercise their rights as human. Personally,

although

exercising human right as

individual

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an individual

individuals

is of substantial benefit to young ones, the debilitating effects of adopting abroad or modern day ways of behaving and

it’s

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

negative impacts on the society is overwhelming and measures to curb

this

deary prospect should be encouraged. In conclusion, having explored both vantage points, I reiterate that the rise in

misdemeanor

a crime less serious than a felony

misdemeanour

eclipse

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eclipses

the importance of allowing youngster’s right to freedom of expression and

hence

, they should trade under the heels of our ancestors.