Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People think that
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
conservation is must
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conservation is a must
for every
animals
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animal
. But some people believe that it is not
necessery
absolutely essential
necessary
necessarily
unnecessary
to protect every wild animal. Every living creature has equal right to live on the earth. No one has right to kill the
animals whether
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animals, whether
they are big or small or danger and non danger. As per my
opinion every
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opinion, every
wild animal should be protected. I will discuss both views that why we should protect the animals.
To begin
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with, if we discuss about the conservation of all the wild animals
then
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there are many reasons behind them. Every animal has its own importance and use. Nature
create
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creates
the creature for some purpose. If we conserve the few animals and let the other animals distinct
then
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it will become
unbalance
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unbalanced
in the nature. It will break down the food chain that
keep
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keeps
everything balanced on the earth. So it
become
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becomes
necessary for us to keep every
animals
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animal
preserve and safe. To continue with the other views of saving the few wildlife. There is no doubt that some animals are very rare in population and other are fine in their numbers. The animals which are rare must be taken care
first
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and preserve at the safe place.
For example
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now a days the numbers of white
loins
large gregarious predatory feline of Africa and India having a tawny coat with a shaggy mane in the male
lions
are getting
distinct
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distinctly
so it must be
preserve
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preserved
by the wildlife centuries. There is no doubt that few animals are getting lost specially wild elephants,
loin
large gregarious predatory feline of Africa and India having a tawny coat with a shaggy mane in the male
lion
, tigers
etecetra
rules governing socially acceptable behavior
etiquette
and that must be
conserved but
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conserved, but
on the other side in order to balance the food chain it becomes necessary to save each and every animal on the earth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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