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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often said by certain folks that secondary schools ought to include the free public services by the pupils as part of the curriculum.
This
 is because
this
 trend has a myriad of benefits to offer to an individual and society as well. I believe, secondary schools should add the unpaid
community
 service as part of the subject because it will teach a person how to be generous and respected member of the society without expecting any rewards, but at the same time some pupil may develop an interest outside the study subjects that would raze their forthcoming. The
first
 benefit is that students will have a chance to learn how to be kind and develop a habit of doing selfless work for the
community
 at no cost. Because,
this
 work involved no rewards, the outcome of
this
 action would be in the favour of forming a
community
 which has respected and responsible members who would not let the society be in need.
For example
, one of mu friend studied from the African educational institutes, there they used to have participated in the voluntary services for the public in order to clear the exam and he discovered that his
community
 needs much help to peak the health system.
However
, making them forcefully participated in the voluntary exercise affects their academic score as they will unable to focus on their studies at fully.
This
 would make them discourage about
further
 studying and in the future they will end up with detrimental circumstances in livelihood.
For instance
, as per the Oxford University management department survey, 70% of the students shown soared, interest in doing unpaid work for the
community
 as they found the abolish to academic learning. In conclusion, voluntary service can be helpful and a devastating action for the high school learners,
however it
Accept comma addition
however, it
 depends on the individual understanding and the state of mental condition of the students.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • high school programmes
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • improving the neighbourhood
  • teaching sports
  • sense of responsibility
  • empathy
  • broader perspective
  • societal issues
  • college applications
  • job applications
  • positive impact
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