As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

People in developing countries tend to purchase their own cars. Its
a
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an
advantage to have your own car, there are many factors that support
this
. Cars are not the problem
to
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of
environment
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the environment
.
Its
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It's
the
pollution
emmited
expel (gases or odors)
emitted
omitted
that is
destructive.
Firstly
, many individuals contribute to the rise of the nation. For them to reach their workplace, they do need a means of transport. Automobiles will provide a comfortable ride to reach their destination. A person who is not much tired because of travel can contribute more and
also
stay happy after work.
Secondly
, people love
comfort
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the comfort
. All the hard work they go through in their life is to have a comfortable lifestyle.
This
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These
vehicles provide them that. Either to go to a grocery store and do a big shopping or to visit their friends and family on a beautiful weekend they can just drive whenever and
whereever
where in the world
wherever
where ever
.
Inaddition
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In addition
to the advantages it
also
gives a self of belonging ness and prestige to the people. To Identify themselves
amoung
in the middle of
among
the people who are in the same social and economic level,
this
is one of the
parameter
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parameters
. Those who are doing
business presentation
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a business presentation
is very crucial. The car he drives
also
have
impact
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an impact
on the prospective clients. Contrary to all of these there are disadvantages
such
as global
warming which
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warming, which
is caused by the emission of pollutants, traffic jam caused by lot of vehicles on roads at
same time
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the same time
. Sound
pollution
because of the horn. Of course they
distrub
move deeply
disturb
environment
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the environment
and
also
driving experience. But
its
it is
it's
not something which cannot be controlled. Statistics show that 90% of the
pollution
is caused by 10% of vehicles because of their bad condition. Situation of roads
also contribute
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also contributes
to the condition of vehicles and traffic jam. A similar survey show that top cities that contribute to the
pollution
in the world is in
india where
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India, where
India where
the roads are bad, rules are ignored and
vehicles emmit lot
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vehicles Emmit lots
vehicles Emmit lot
of pollutants. Developing nations
has
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have
several rules and restrictions that facilitate for
the better
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the best
driving experience. In
United States
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the United States
the roads are properly maintained and there is a heavy parking fee in the downtown that inspire people to use trains to reach downtown. Cars there are well built and well maintained. Honking is not encouraged and drivers follow lane rules. In conclusion individual usage of cars has a lot of advantages and the environmental
hazords
a source of danger; a possibility of incurring loss or misfortune
hazards
are caused not just because of the usage of cars. Situation of roads, traffic rules, car condition are factors which taken care we can mitigate the disadvantages and have a comfortable living.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personal mobility
  • convenience
  • commuting
  • quality of life
  • personalized space
  • carbon emissions
  • global warming
  • air pollution
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental degradation
  • resource depletion
  • electric vehicles
  • carpooling
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