You had arranged to meet a friend next week, but you have realised that you will not able to go. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter cancel the meeting with your friend and apologize explain why you will not be able to met your friend suggest where and when you could see each other instead

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Dear Mamurochka I am writing to apologize

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for not being able to attend our schedule and

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long-awaited

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long- awaited

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long-awaited

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meeting

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week. I am very sorry I couldn’t go to the meeting. I have missed you so much, but

unfortunately

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we have to postpone the meeting for some reason. The reason I can’t go is

because

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I am getting married. As you know there are many issues to be resolved before the wedding. Engagement ceremony, wedding dress, invitations and similar basic issues. If I don't lose

this

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situation is not unfamiliar to you. Because you

also

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recently

get

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married. I know very well that you are

also

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looking forward to our meeting. But don’t be upset, we will definitely see you in the coming days. Because the wedding day is very close,

that is

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after a week. I hope you will be with me on

such

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a happy day. I am still sending a special invitation to the wedding. I hope you will not be upset with me and you will understand me correctly.

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Yours

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Your

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sincerely

Gavhar

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Gather

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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