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You missed one of the most important lessons of your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter apologize for not attending explain why you did not attend say what you will do to make up for it

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Dear Miss Zuhra Abdukarimova I am writing
apologize
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 for not being able to participate in the process of explaining the
lesson
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 yesterday. I am sincerely sorry for missing the most necessary and important
lesson
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. I really wanted to attend the
lesson
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. Unfortunately, I couldn’t attend the
lesson
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 for some
reasons
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reason
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. The reason I couldn’t attend the
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because
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was because
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 we were not in the city. I really wanted to come for the
lesson
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, but since there was no transport
because
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ofbecause
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 pandemic. I will prepare
for
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to
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 pass the exam until the
next
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 cycle. But it will not be very easy for me , but I will try to do my best. And I will never go out of town before the lessons. I realized that during a pandemic, even traffic
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 becomes problematic. I will take into account all factors in order not to miss more than one exam. I hope you understand me correctly and you will not be upset with me. And I would like you to know one more thing I will justify your confidence by getting a high score in the exam. Your
sencerely
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sincerely
, Malika Tursunova
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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