The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001
The given pie charts illustrate
us
the data about the proportion of alteration that a special UK school spent in three years which were 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Change preposition
to us
Overall
, what stands out from the three charts are
that teacher Correct subject-verb agreement
is
salaries
were the highest expense while
insurances were the lowest in all three years. Moreover
, the cost of insurance and furniture and other equipment increased, although
other worker salaries
and resources e.g. books declined slightly during the given years.
When looked
at the graphs in detail, Wrong verb form
looking
rate
of teacher Correct article usage
the rate
salaries
made up approximately half of all the costs. Fix the agreement mistake
Expenses
Expense
of insurance increased from 2% to %8 Add an article
The expense
in contrast
, resources fell down
between 1981 and 2001. Change preposition
apply
According to
the graphs furniture
and equipment ratio had Correct article usage
the furniture
flactuately
Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
increasing
that it reached Wrong verb form
increased
to
a quarter of all costs in 2001. In 1981 other Change preposition
apply
worker
Fix the agreement mistake
workers
salaries
account for near
a fourth of all spending, Change the word
nearly
however
, this
plunged to 15 % in 2001.Submitted by zeynep akdemir on
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