Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
There is no doubt that after a long working hours it is important to have a free time to recharge both mind and body.
However
, these days leisure time has been minimised by working population
to focus more on their Suggestion
the working population
work
,
but in my opinionAccept space
,
,
Accept space
,
this
development has many repercussions.
First
and foremost, the working class of the society may lack the quality in their profession. Our body is not equipped to work
continuously, instead
, it requires ample of rest before starting an another work
. In contrast
, the late hours working and lack of sleep would cause some serious health issues, which, eventually, diminish the productivity and deteriorate the physical health. For instance
, some studies suggested that those who have been maintaing
a balance between keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
maintaining
work
and relaxation would perform better than others who do not.
Another negative of this
is that problems in family life. When a person spent a huge part of the day in his work place
, his time for both wife and children would be minimised. Due to a place where work is done
workplace
this
, the communication between these significant figures may reduce, resulting in sprouting of some marrital
issues. of or relating to the state of marriage
marital
For instance
, it has been reported that one of the main reasons of broken marriages is the unavailability of partner, since they work
lately. Similarly
, children lack care and support from their parents, when they go through a critical period of life.
In conclusion, even though some merits can be seen if anyone work
out of his usual hours, the net outcome may have damaging effects on his both
personal and professional Suggestion
on both his
life
, according to my viewpoint.Suggestion
lives
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...