Many Teenagers now have their own smartphone. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion
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a teenager
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essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give my own point of view.
The main advantage is more convenience to Linking Words
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our friends wherever Use synonyms
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Additionally
, if you have any trouble or accident, you can call the ambulance or police for help immediately. Linking Words
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and Correct your spelling
suddenly
stop
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at
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, you can call for Correct your spelling
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help.
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However
, there are Linking Words
also
many drawbacks. Linking Words
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technology Linking Words
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people can easy to Change the verb form
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each other, but Change preposition
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distraction from communication with family. The best example is many children Correct article usage
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their smartphone, Change preposition
on
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this
make them Correct pronoun usage
which
less
time to Add a missing verb
have less
share time
with their family or talk with them. As a result, some children are more likely distant Verb problem
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their
parent and it cause Change preposition
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a indifferent and alienated relationships
.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that Correct the article-noun agreement
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the mobile
phone
is closely Use synonyms
interrated
with our life, Correct your spelling
integrated
this
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make
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makes
us
link with each other and keep Change the pronoun
our
it
touch easily. Correct your spelling
in
However
, it can Linking Words
also
distract our communication, Linking Words
therefore
, we should limit our leisure time to Linking Words
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smartphone
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