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Some People Say That It Is Possible To Tell A Lot About A Person’s Culture And Character From Their Choice Of Clothing. do agree or disagree

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It is a very common debate that we can depict someone's personality through their costume because mostly people wears according to their traditional dresses. I believe we can tell the traditions through their dress, but we cannot depict someone’s personality.
For example
,
Arab man’s
Suggestion
an Arab man’s outfit
outfit
 is
jubalia
spicy Creole dish of rice and ham, sausage, chicken, or shellfish with tomatoes, peppers, onions, and celery
jambalaya
globally
 and
women
Suggestion
woman's
outfit
is
Suggestion
are
are being
abays
an indentation of a shoreline larger than a cove but smaller than a gulf
bays
abuse
obese
 so we can tell they belong from a
country
 where they follow to cover their bodies and their
outfit
 shows that they are Muslims, but we cannot be sure If he/she is a good person he is not a liar or practicing Muslim. Your dress indicates your
country
 or your tribes, and it is a well-known fact that people use
outfit
 according to the environment and traditions. Yes through
outfit
 colours and length we can tell the weather of the
country
 and pattern style they belong to.
For example
, you are going on a road and you have seen a woman who is wearing a red skirt with a white robe and she wrapped her shirt with a slash. With her outlook, I can tell that she belongs from china and If you have little more knowledge about their
country
 you can tell she belongs from a
hanfu
causing or capable of causing harm
harmful
 group who follows is ancient Chinese culture.
On the other hand
, I feel guessing a personality through a dress is not right. Yes, you can predict the culture, but you can never tell about their inner self.
For example
, if you are going a road and a girl who was wearing a long shirt and tight pants snatch money from you what you think that all the women who wear similar to the thief are criminals. No, you cannot blame all the people because their appearances are similar to the thief.
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