Some people think that cooking is an important skill for young people to learn. Others believe that it is better for people to learn how to cook after they become adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by most people that teenagers and adolescents should be taught culinary skills. In my opinion, adults should learn gastronomy skills as they can pursue
this
art
based on their interests.
However
, youngsters should know the necessary cooking skills, in case of an emergency. On the one hand, it is essential for young people to know how to operate the gas stove so that they know how to handle urgent situations, in case of any gas leakage particularly when they are alone at home.
In addition
to
this
, children should know basic cooking skills
such
as toasting a bread, cooking Maggi and rice to help them survive, when they are away from home.
Hence
, parents and schools should teach essential cooking skills to children.
On the other hand
, it is best to learn cooking food when children grow into adults. As they will be able to invest more time on learning the new skill as compared to when they were young. The reason is mainly because children at a young age are already under pressure because of academic subjects.
As a result
, they may consider
this
art
as another burden.
In addition
to
this
, most adults pursue
this
art
as their hobby.
Consequently
, people learn different types of cuisines based on their interest.
Therefore
,
art
Suggestion
the art
of cooking should be learn by
matured
Suggestion
maturing
people.
Finally
, In my opinion, I think that the cooking is an
art
. One will be able to perform it well, only, if they have an interest. Adults are more matured and are aware of their choices.
However
, schools should conduct special sessions for children to teach them the basic skills in case of emergencies. To illustrate
this
, recently, a survey was done by the Harvard university students where most people opted to cook food at home, as their leisure time.
Thus
, adults will able to learn
this
skill in a much better way as compared to young children. To conclude, In my view proper cooking skills should learn at adulthood stage,
although
children can make learning the necessary culinary skills. In
this
way, children can develop more interest in
art
Suggestion
the art
of cooking.
Submitted by Iqra Bismi on

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