Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that the
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of the residents increased by granting them various sports centres, while others think that it has the minor impact on
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, and other steps are necessary.
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, the sports facilities give physical strength
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the human body
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, I believe public awareness campaign to educate people about the importance of the healthy diet should be the most efficient mode to improve the
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of the public. On the one hand, sports
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as volleyball, cricket and badminton play a significant role in building physical strength.It burns extra calories of our
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through vigorous playing.Games not only build muscle, but
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rejuvenate our mood.
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, World
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Organisation found that 30% of people, who are active in games are
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healthier
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lean physique
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a lean physique
compare to lethargic public.Despite
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, I think without giving proper knowledge of nutritive food, people may not raise their
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standards.
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, the government should launch a public awareness campaign to provide a proper information about nutritive food.
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meal gives the essential elements like carbohydrates, protein, minerals and vitamins to our
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.In our
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carbohydrate converts into glucose,
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the main content, which provides energy to our
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.
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, the central council could shed some light on
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measure and encourage people to eat more healthy meal.
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, similar
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in Canada
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get
30% of reduction in obese people.I
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believe, diet with full of nutrition plays a vital role to increase healthy lifestyle. In conclusion,
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, sports are required to build mus
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provides
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benefits I believe, to encourage people via campaign to have nutritive food is
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • sports facilities
  • physical activity
  • exercise
  • chronic diseases
  • heart disease
  • obesity
  • inclusivity
  • participation
  • safe environment
  • social interaction
  • community engagement
  • comprehensive approach
  • health education programs
  • environmental factors
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • quality healthcare services
  • public health initiatives
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