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University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages

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Recently, university students are more and more interested in studying overseas.
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 may cause some challenges, from my perspective of view the benefits of studying abroad are far more than the drawbacks. The Great advantage of studying abroad is to have the opportunity of studying in one of the most prestigious universities in the world.
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 will end up to get better job opportunities later in life.
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, when graduates of the same degree apply for a job, preference will be given to those who have a degree from Big universities in the world. Another benefit of studying internationally is being more self-confident. Living as a youth in a foreign region with a different culture and language, causes students to struggle with different situations which will end up in strong personality. The most important demerit of studying internationally is the costs. While students can get their degree in their home region with spending a little money, studying abroad will lead to some extra costs added to the tuition fees, like the money that will be used for housing and transportation. Another setback that can be considered for studying in a foreign country is being alone. Students should put their family and friends behind and start to live in new situation which may sometimes cause them to end up with psychological problems like depression. To summarize,
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 overseas may cost more and induce emotional problems for students, in my opinion, studying in well-known universities should be considered a great opportunity.
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